behind the crows

I've been having a hard time with where Chasing Crows has gone in the last four chapters -- the ones that I have written but haven't posted yet. It's not that the story itself has gone off the rails. The story is going right where I hoped it would. The problem is with the storytelling. I have so many big ideas that need to be communicated, and I've been doing it in the form of conversations between the characters. I'm worried that will make the story either boring or confusing.

Mild spoilers for Chasing Crows Chapter 2.
You might want to read the chapter before you read the blog about it.

Mild spoilers for Chasing Crows Chapter 3.
You might want to read the chapter before you read the blog about it.

This year I've been thinking a lot about superheroes, supervillains, and the real world.